Post by Chelsbot on Oct 24, 2009 21:00:18 GMT -5
houseguest's its time two compete four the Veto!
Oh, I'm sorry.
Houseguests, it's time to compete for the Veto!
Renny has nominated Jordan and Roddy for eviction, but this competition could change everything. The winner will have the ability to remove one of Renny's nominees from the chopping block.
Tonight's competition is called "Schoolhouse Veto," and you'll need to get out your red pens for this one.
Below you will find confessionals written by the future Warzone 4 contestants. However, their spelling and grammar is atrocious, and I can barely make out what they're saying. Your task is to help me correct their mistakes so that I can post episodes.
Simply copy the 8 confessionals below and send them to me by PM with the mistakes corrected. The Houseguest whose submission contains the fewest number of errors will win the Power of Veto. In the event of a tie, the first person to submit out of the tied individuals will win.
When making corrections, do not change the word order. Do not add any extra words; use what you are given. For conjunctions, do not split them up into two words—just add the appropriate punctuation.
The deadline to submit this competition is tomorrow night at 10 PM EST.
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Cast: Amber (Played by Zosha), Eric (Played by Peter), Erika (Played by Steve), Jessie (Played by Ron), Justin (Played by Adam), Maggie (Played by Makenzie), Marcellas (Played by Fred), Natalie (Played by Penny)
Jessie: Mr Pectacular just one HOH for the third time this season! Was their ever any doubt? i love myself i have the widest most insane shoulders. all the ladys love me. i will never loose a competition. last week, kent tryed to get me out but he payed the price 4 it. maggie, and natalie, also want me out. idk y but im definately putting the too of them up this week. thats it four my confessional. im tired so im going too lay down.
Natalie: i no jessie is planning on putting i up. it will be maggie and i. im calling that write now. i told maggie that us girls should stick twogether and come up with a plan. im going to come up with a lie im going two tell jessie that i overherd marcellas saying that he wanted two get jessie out next week. maggie will try to get jessie too put up justin. if the plan works maggie and i will control jessies’ HOH and still be hear next week.
Maggie: its time to use my mind control too my advantage. natalie and i r tight. were working together too keep ourselfs in the game. natalie is coming up with a lie about marcellas. i think she will be able to effect the nominations and keep herself safe. now i need to keep myself off the bloc. i no that justin is a alias. im going to get jessie too put him up. i just have two use my amazing manipulation abilitys im a really good player. i can talk ne1 intwo nething.
Justin: im livid i was just nominated by my boy jessie. he nominated marcellas and i. y would he nominate too people who r in his aliance? i thought jessie was smarter then that he just let maggie and natalie walk all over him. i hate maggie and natalie. their going to pay. after I when the Veto they r going to be sorry. maggie your going next week i no u lied about me. i am not a alias.
Marcellas: i one the Vito! dont i look cute with the necklace on? but after thinking about it a lot I decided not to use the Vito. alot of people were surprised that i didnt use it. i dont want ne1 else to have to suffer thru being nominated. jessie told me that he was in love with me, so i no ill be safe.
Amber: Marcellas… Marcellas… Marcellas could of used the Veto on himself, but he didnt!
im sorry im so emotional write now, but i no that marcellas is probabley leaving. he had the biggest heart of nebody. i tryed to tell him to use the Veto on himself, but he wouldnt listen. i want to keep marcellas, but i already sweared on my daughters life to jessie that ill vote marcellas out.
Erika: idk whose leaving. i no that I dont want too make ne waves this week. ill probabley just vote with the majoraty. maybe i will just ask jessie who he wants gone and do what he says. its smart to just do whatever the HOH wants i dont want to make any enemys. chelsbot im sorry if ive been boring but i have to be the ultimate floater in this house.
Eric: every one was planning too vote off marcellas. however things changed when justin went crazy. he went off on jessie and held a knife too his throat. we were all scared allison grodner came on the loudspeaker and called justin to the dairy room. she told him that they’re was know need to sit down and pointed too the exit. so now there is know eviction this week. marcellas is lucky he would of been evicted had this not happened.
Oh, I'm sorry.
Houseguests, it's time to compete for the Veto!
Renny has nominated Jordan and Roddy for eviction, but this competition could change everything. The winner will have the ability to remove one of Renny's nominees from the chopping block.
Tonight's competition is called "Schoolhouse Veto," and you'll need to get out your red pens for this one.
Below you will find confessionals written by the future Warzone 4 contestants. However, their spelling and grammar is atrocious, and I can barely make out what they're saying. Your task is to help me correct their mistakes so that I can post episodes.
Simply copy the 8 confessionals below and send them to me by PM with the mistakes corrected. The Houseguest whose submission contains the fewest number of errors will win the Power of Veto. In the event of a tie, the first person to submit out of the tied individuals will win.
When making corrections, do not change the word order. Do not add any extra words; use what you are given. For conjunctions, do not split them up into two words—just add the appropriate punctuation.
The deadline to submit this competition is tomorrow night at 10 PM EST.
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Cast: Amber (Played by Zosha), Eric (Played by Peter), Erika (Played by Steve), Jessie (Played by Ron), Justin (Played by Adam), Maggie (Played by Makenzie), Marcellas (Played by Fred), Natalie (Played by Penny)
Jessie: Mr Pectacular just one HOH for the third time this season! Was their ever any doubt? i love myself i have the widest most insane shoulders. all the ladys love me. i will never loose a competition. last week, kent tryed to get me out but he payed the price 4 it. maggie, and natalie, also want me out. idk y but im definately putting the too of them up this week. thats it four my confessional. im tired so im going too lay down.
Natalie: i no jessie is planning on putting i up. it will be maggie and i. im calling that write now. i told maggie that us girls should stick twogether and come up with a plan. im going to come up with a lie im going two tell jessie that i overherd marcellas saying that he wanted two get jessie out next week. maggie will try to get jessie too put up justin. if the plan works maggie and i will control jessies’ HOH and still be hear next week.
Maggie: its time to use my mind control too my advantage. natalie and i r tight. were working together too keep ourselfs in the game. natalie is coming up with a lie about marcellas. i think she will be able to effect the nominations and keep herself safe. now i need to keep myself off the bloc. i no that justin is a alias. im going to get jessie too put him up. i just have two use my amazing manipulation abilitys im a really good player. i can talk ne1 intwo nething.
Justin: im livid i was just nominated by my boy jessie. he nominated marcellas and i. y would he nominate too people who r in his aliance? i thought jessie was smarter then that he just let maggie and natalie walk all over him. i hate maggie and natalie. their going to pay. after I when the Veto they r going to be sorry. maggie your going next week i no u lied about me. i am not a alias.
Marcellas: i one the Vito! dont i look cute with the necklace on? but after thinking about it a lot I decided not to use the Vito. alot of people were surprised that i didnt use it. i dont want ne1 else to have to suffer thru being nominated. jessie told me that he was in love with me, so i no ill be safe.
Amber: Marcellas… Marcellas… Marcellas could of used the Veto on himself, but he didnt!
im sorry im so emotional write now, but i no that marcellas is probabley leaving. he had the biggest heart of nebody. i tryed to tell him to use the Veto on himself, but he wouldnt listen. i want to keep marcellas, but i already sweared on my daughters life to jessie that ill vote marcellas out.Erika: idk whose leaving. i no that I dont want too make ne waves this week. ill probabley just vote with the majoraty. maybe i will just ask jessie who he wants gone and do what he says. its smart to just do whatever the HOH wants i dont want to make any enemys. chelsbot im sorry if ive been boring but i have to be the ultimate floater in this house.
Eric: every one was planning too vote off marcellas. however things changed when justin went crazy. he went off on jessie and held a knife too his throat. we were all scared allison grodner came on the loudspeaker and called justin to the dairy room. she told him that they’re was know need to sit down and pointed too the exit. so now there is know eviction this week. marcellas is lucky he would of been evicted had this not happened.
